June 20, 2004

  • SUMMER SOLTICE


    I welcoME,  your warmth...
    .........................................
    I'm feeling my heat...
    If my lips asked
    For another dance...
    Would your lips
    Tango with mine?...
    .................................
    game

    I felt your eyes
    move slowly over me
    with no one around
    to referee...
    and you stole
    for my home...
    .....................................
    Prelude to a Kiss
    ...
    when eyes hold steady
    in a steady stare
    and lips speak 
    with foreign tongues...
    peer deep
    pierce deeper
    peak deepest
    ...to see me come undone...
    .................................................
    I hope everyone enjoyed, a hot summer day!


     

Comments (10)

  • Thank you dear Dottie...It was most pleasant here with the wind and all....hmmm Prelude to a kiss....I love this......Dorothea....game...very seductive..

  • Your poems always make me get my chopper out.

  • watch that foreign tongue!

  • Pleased to see you haven't changed much since I've last been here.  I've seen these games played, here and there...

    ~wesh~

  • VIVIDLY ORGASMIC!!! I like this!

  • Hi ladi, hoping you are doing well.  Love all the poems you have been writing especially the one just previous to this entry.  UMHuh, good poem, love it.  I'm sitting here yawning, I have so much to do and there is no way I will be able to catch up in Xanga, I know it, I hope everyone will forgive me but, duty calls.  I did get a new entry up for today, I made that a first priority.  Hoping to visit just a few sites tonight then I have to get some real computing accomplished.

    Love all your writing as usual, How about looking at your latest and picking something out for the challenge or, write me something just for the page.

    Be good kiddo, keep those dogs out from underfoot.

  • Yippie you are back and still making me question things I think....
    I love the way you put things and the way I can have like two or three different thoughts as I read them...
    Well take care..Zachary

  • Wishing those were my hollyhocks and my rock wall but sadly, only a view on a drive I had to photograph.  I hopped out of the car and took about a dozen different shots.  They were beautiful.  As a child, we made holly hock dolls.  Really cute little dancers with eyes and toothpick arms.

  • I love the teasing flair~ very nice or not so nice Dottie. lol  I love your style.

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