June 19, 2004
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this is my mouthful!
fuck you
and the horse you think
you rode in on...
how "dare" you think
( in parenthesis)
you begin
to know
me...
when the majority of your
time
was spent surfing...
the waves
splashing around
with teen spirits...
you don't want to (fuck) with ME
don't be an
idiot
fool
when "i" can simply
"click"
to be rid of you...
when things don't go right
with your miserable life
don't point
your finger
of blaME at ME
obviously...
you are not used to dealing with
strong woMEn
that had nothing
to do
with the inadequacies
of
the outcome
of you...
perhaps
"i" found your
read/red
words
intriguiging...
but my reality
lives a life
that doesn't include
you
(as you constantly pointed out)
"i" think for myself...
(my selfish indulged rule)
and i don't give second thoughts
to the mediocrices of you...
you have
bit off more
than you can chew
i can be a mouthful
don't...
MEss around with...
well you know...
ME
Comments (10)
Awesome!! I wish I had the balls to write somethig like this. I know I've felt this strongly before but was afraid I'd explode by the time I got it out like this. You've inspired me .. wish I had somebody to piss me off this much!
WHOA....I shall close the door gently....I felt that all the way to Tennessee....
DAMN!! What passionate anger you have displayed! VERY well done. I gotta admit... "...the inadequacies of the outcome of you" is an absolutely awesoME line! For me... this is the best poem of yours I have read to date. Honestly, I really, really dig it. Peace.
PS: I hope I never piss you off. I don't think I'd enjoy reading about it later.
The best kind of fools to consort with are those you only need to *click* to be rid of!
You said an eloquent mouthful there. I couldn't have said it better myself, and that's saying a lot.
nice power, i bet it felt very good writing this.
Like a razor blade laid to the wrist, one soft filling stroke to shave, one heavier biting thrust to cut, the impression of danger draws us all to the flame of your words, as long as they are pointed the other way...
Fuck you for screwing Brenda
I'll tell you what
Plan I've got
I'm putting you in the blender.
Enjoyed reading your poetry. I'm a poetry fanatic.
"He who does not understand your silence will probably not understand your words."
(**Elbert Hubbard")
"The farther you enter into the truth, the deeper it is."
(**Bankei)
Dayum!!!! I'll just tip away quietly and let you finish letting him have it...click away....and give him one for me!!!
no seriously...tell us how you really feel...that is powerful...
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