July 25, 2007

  • ...hindsight...

    i can see
     now
    that you
     are not
    a man
      of your
    word...
      much more
    a man without
     my action...
    and much less...
      this breaks my
    heart...
      everytime...
    i can see
      more clearly...

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  • always so nice to read you when you take a moment to write...

  • I hear you and know it all comes from your heart.  I wonder if things in this world will ever culminate into our positive dreams.

    I miss you kiddo.  Your writing has such a history fed by so much reality.  I know you are as worn out as I am.  I hope for up times.

  • You can't blame a person for not being who you wanted them to be. You can only blame yourself for wanting. Heartbreak usually comes from a breach of trust but sometimes, it's just circumstances beyond our control. Your poetry doesn't have the same bite I remember... you just seem very bitter.

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