June 4, 2007
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I am having
a hard time
wrapping
my brain
around
your train
of thoughts...
especially when
you say
what you
are thinking
"outloud"
...and this scares me
just a bit...
but...
not so much
that I
would quit...
trying to wrap
my brain
...around
...around
...and...
... around
you
in deep
depths
of circled thoughts...
that fill even
to my evened head...
...and knowing all along
that love
has everything
...to do with us...
Comments (3)
It's embarrassing how much I like your work and how bad my excuses are for not being here to read. I hope my comment finds you well. I usually watch from the challenge site for updates but will get them in my emails now. Sometimes I don't catch them there either. Getting older isn't a picnic.
My best good thoughts coming your way,
Becca
Sorry I haven't commented in a while, but you haven't either so I don't really feel too guilty. I've always liked your work too. I've been here a few times already and couldn't think of a comment except "I like this" and it deserves much more than that. I can't help wondering who you're talking about. I just pretend it's me and the poem becomes even more interesting.
You need to write more often... makes it easier for me to understand what you say. I didn't have that problem before you went AWOL. I've been missing you, Dottie.
love is love, and love is life, and life is the question answered by love.
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