May 22, 2005

  • PIERCING THOUGHTS...
       (how many are there, now?)

    I already loved you
    Unconditionally...
    So why
    Keep presenting me with
    Your confused conditions?

    Blindness to the real world
    Is just blind...
    Can't you see this?
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    You
    Are the only
    One
    Messing up
    Your life's
    Map positions
    So...
    Don't point bla
    me
    In no other direction
    Than where it is due...


    Choices are chosen, by
    You...
    Is there any way
    That I can help
    Ease your burden?
    Perhaps...
    Forgive
    Your load
    Of disruptive thoughts
    That have disturbed
    Us, mine and our lives...
    Perhaps?
    (but that would be dealing with my life)
    (not yours)...

    Do you
    Really want me
    To wash my hands clean of you
    Without...a finalized rinse?

    You used to shine in your own brillance...
    So please, don't
    Dull down
    Your own life...now
    With the age appropiate, drival
    That has dripped from baby tongues
    (and has been done to death)
     By many  previous generations...

    ...Think for yourself
    For once...or twice....or trice...
    (and be prepared)
    To suffer the consequences
    Of your own, unconcious,
    Unawehred life...

    "The pen is mighter than the sword"  
    (or so it is said)
    ...and I find this particularly true
    With you
    And your Expressions
    Of  verbatumed words
    So eloquently vocalized
    By your fingertips...
    (as gospels)...

    Change your moods,
    (to suit the madness of it all)
    your clothes and specifically
    Your natural blonde hair...
    (then...go figure)
    The awehrness of it all...

Comments (5)

  • Really good to see you back and writing your heart out again. Of course, it always seemed that you did your best writing when you were unhappy about something and this seems no different... just like old times.

  • and a poetic breath of fresh air...you have been missed Dottie...

  • wow Dottie.....another amazing masterpiece

    I have missed ur words

    Dorothea

  • hey bo, are you happy? don't you realize that misery breeds creativity? surely you understand the way art works, i don't have to explain inspiration to you.

    stop trying to troll my mother.

  • not trolling beamie.. I have no bait.

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