July 26, 2004
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I am a wordsmith...
I could bend the anvil
With my hot words...
(thank you for giving defination to...ME)
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On this stage of my life
I am especially, acting like a fool...
If you would give MorE encores...please,
Maybe...throw some flowers at my feet...
I could co-star in life with you...
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My lips
are liquid
and my
words...
drip...
drip
drip
drip
...
..
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Comments (20)
yes....you are a most eloquent wordsmith. well said.
There are flowers at your feet.
Peace.
You've certainly bent my anvil
you live that definition...and we do owe you more respect in how the words touch us...
I like the way you did that Lips poem ,unusual, well I haven't seen it but it might have been done before Cheers Portia
Indeed you are a wordsmith and I enjoy reading all your anvil puts on paper for our reading. You continue to drip, drip, drip those words, I love them all.
Welcome back from your trip. I hope you had a great time.
Regards,
wow i love your writing.
Just came by to leave you more flowers. Peace.
Yes you are a wordsmith! a quite daring one at that. Such imagination with words...classic Dottie. I hope you're ok...you be burning it at both ends. Love you
Beautiful words..
I will read some more of your work, if you don't mind
Hey, sorry I haven't been around on the xanga thing for a while. I've been quite busy do to a family illness. I had to do some catching up on your poems, and as always they are great!
~Shelby
your poetry is really unique and beautiful and im quite missing it a lot, hope you havent fallen off the world (oh wait the world is round?)
- S.S.
That's it? Nothing more?
Hey! watch where you're dripping those words! you're getting words all over my lap. I see that you don't write without me
.. I'll be back to fill you up with words soon. Knowing you, the first ones will be heavy with cussin' and fire and brimstone ... I'm missing all the warmth from your inferno. I prefer the heat to be hot. I'm not a big fan of 'cool' passion.
Loving the first and third one. I really enjoyed the second one as well.
Hope you are feeling well.
You have quite the way with words. Beautiful imagery.
Hello. Its been awhile. And I still love your writing. The lips poem was very... evocative. Anyway, I will be around more, I hope.
Cirse
I could co-star in life with you...
You're just amazing me all over the place! That's a really great line! And your conclusion is especially effective! How long have you been writing like this? It feels a lot different than your earlier works.
I like these
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