June 29, 2004

  • Candlelight Fantasy
     
    I want to watch
    Our flicked reflections
    Make love
    Against twilighted walls
    As we whisper
    Shadowed affections
    Into each other's
    Subdued ears...
    .........................................................

    Finger Curls


    I loved the way
    You undid my hair
    With your talk
    Coming in a steady flow...
    You used that hand wisely
    To set my locks free
    To unleash my unruly riot...
    As we swayed together
    Slowly...in a lip-locked, headed
    To and fro...



    ..............................................


    Tug-of-War


    Your kiss...
    With the gentle
    Tug on my lips
    Was...
    Tongue provoking
    ............................

    I've shown you more
    Than I've let anybody
    See...

    In a long...long...time
    And you made me 
    Smile...

    I will wait...
    Until tomorrow...

Comments (10)

  • i will wait...for an ever....

  • I really love your poetry of passion. To put it simply... It's raw and honest. I dig the reads! Peace.

  • Dottie, my time has been so pressured of late.  I try to burn the candle at both ends and still don't get everything done I would like to get done. 

    My subscription reading is way behind and my commenting is pathetically out of whack.  I have tried in the past to comment on every entry someone made on their blogs but, I can't do it anymore as I have so much to try to get done in a day and my days seem to be growing shorter.  I have read back in your entries to where I last read.  You still amaze me, with your words.  I find you continuing to say the same love poems and love reflections that are a part of you and a part of anyone who has gone through what you have gone through and are going through but still, each written piece comes out differently.  I think you have an amazing way with words, a unique use of your poetic talents, so unique, no one else that I read comes close to your style.  Style, that is the word, you have a style of your own that I find extremely readable and worthwhile.  I have no idea if your "style" imitates someone you read or have read but I fine it to be just very special. 

    I think you are a special person.  I hear it in all of your words and think you deserve much more than you have been dished out.  I think you deserve better commenting from my part of the world.  But, I do hope you will forgive me for not being here all of the time to read and comment as I find all of your entries very much worth commenting on.

  • My cadlelit fantasy
    Is to twirl your hair
    In a tug-o-war
    In my underwear ...

  • lol....your comments are quite funny...some sincere...but passion de moot...just cracked me up....I am looking foward to your visit....Dorothea

  • bravo...now those are some touching pieces...

  • Not meaning to be facetious, but you really SHOULD try getting into greeting cards.  Your's isthe kind of poetry many people search for in the Hallmark store but never find

  • That must have been some kiss!! And of course nobody could make it so interesting. So sweet. I enjoyed talking to you and can't wait to meet you!! See ya soon.

  • Oh there are beautiful!!!

  • Wonderfully evocative words...I can feel the emotions floating in the air...Great poems...

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