June 29, 2004
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Candlelight Fantasy
I want to watch
Our flicked reflections
Make love
Against twilighted walls
As we whisper
Shadowed affections
Into each other's
Subdued ears...
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Finger Curls
I loved the way
You undid my hair
With your talk
Coming in a steady flow...
You used that hand wisely
To set my locks free
To unleash my unruly riot...
As we swayed together
Slowly...in a lip-locked, headed
To and fro...
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Tug-of-War
Your kiss...
With the gentle
Tug on my lips
Was...
Tongue provoking
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I've shown you more
Than I've let anybody
See...
In a long...long...time
And you made me
Smile...
I will wait...
Until tomorrow...
Comments (10)
i will wait...for an ever....
I really love your poetry of passion. To put it simply... It's raw and honest. I dig the reads! Peace.
Dottie, my time has been so pressured of late. I try to burn the candle at both ends and still don't get everything done I would like to get done.
My subscription reading is way behind and my commenting is pathetically out of whack. I have tried in the past to comment on every entry someone made on their blogs but, I can't do it anymore as I have so much to try to get done in a day and my days seem to be growing shorter. I have read back in your entries to where I last read. You still amaze me, with your words. I find you continuing to say the same love poems and love reflections that are a part of you and a part of anyone who has gone through what you have gone through and are going through but still, each written piece comes out differently. I think you have an amazing way with words, a unique use of your poetic talents, so unique, no one else that I read comes close to your style. Style, that is the word, you have a style of your own that I find extremely readable and worthwhile. I have no idea if your "style" imitates someone you read or have read but I fine it to be just very special.
I think you are a special person. I hear it in all of your words and think you deserve much more than you have been dished out. I think you deserve better commenting from my part of the world. But, I do hope you will forgive me for not being here all of the time to read and comment as I find all of your entries very much worth commenting on.
My cadlelit fantasy
Is to twirl your hair
In a tug-o-war
In my underwear ...
lol....your comments are quite funny...some sincere...but passion de moot...just cracked me up....I am looking foward to your visit....Dorothea
bravo...now those are some touching pieces...
Not meaning to be facetious, but you really SHOULD try getting into greeting cards. Your's isthe kind of poetry many people search for in the Hallmark store but never find
That must have been some kiss!! And of course nobody could make it so interesting. So sweet. I enjoyed talking to you and can't wait to meet you!! See ya soon.
Oh there are beautiful!!!
Wonderfully evocative words...I can feel the emotions floating in the air...Great poems...
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